2019-3 Grade Pre-1 Writing (I'll try to test out on my own!!)

 Yes, they do. I agree that they need to improve the way they treat their workers. I'll state about it below.

 First of all, basically young workers are very delligent to work hard. That's why they neglect their own health. If they work too hard, they'll have mental illness or desease. Under their management, they should be taken good care of to be better off and chill out or relax in their work place. 

 Secondly, lateky work-life balance is often mentioned. Workers have to take their weekend off to get resulected from their work. It's a kind of work for workers to take a break. 

 To sum up, I believe work is important, but how we rest is also essentioal for our health. Therefore, I stressed health and work-life balance. Seriousness is of importance in work. However the balance should be considered.

(13 minutes 142 words) 

*I try to write down my essey for passing the test the day after tomorrow. This is not an official answer.