Pre-1st Grade English Composition

TOPIC

Is it acceptable to keep animals in zoos?

POINTS

Animal rights

Educational value

Endangered speices

Living conditions

 I believe that it is acceptable to keep animals in zoos. I'll state about it below.

 First of all, people sometimes go to zoos and see cute animals. They learn how animals live there. It's a realistic idea because people rarely see those animals in forests or villages. Therefore, it will cause people that come to the zoo to have an interest in animals in terms of educational value.

 Next, zoo keepers will help endangered species to lay eggs and have their offsprings in zoos. They love animals and work hard for them. In my opinion, animals of zoos are more fotunate than ones like cats that can't be fed outside.

 To sum up, it's a positive idea to keep animals in zoos. I hope many animals will feel happy regardless of the way to live in zoos or wild life.   

Time: 15 minutes

Words: 141

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