English Composition: 2020-2 Grade 1 Writing

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Agree or disagree: Global overpopulation is a serious threat to the future of humankind

 I disagree that global overpopulation is a serious threat to the future of humankind. I'll state abiout it below.

 First of all, if global overpopulation is expected, humanbeings will consider how we live better for us. We are so wise to live that the study to improve on for our living will be more careful. Now that our population is decreasing, we should think positive. Researchers on the earth are very intelligent and smart because they know about the wonder if the space and explore it. Therefore, they could understand how our population will be much bigger.

 Next, in my opinion,  I hope the number of people on the earth will be much more because it decrease. It is the evidence that countries are rich if their population is larger. Simply, more people live in the country, more money will be earned to make. I believe that if even much more people stayed in the countries, their economy would thrive.

 In addtion to these statements, I mean that not the number of children will increase, but that of children of each family should be increased a little. Even if children are overpopluated in a family, it will be worse in its economy. 

 To sum up, I stated that overpopulation wasn't a threat and tried to plan how we treat overpopulation.  I hope we have more population in the near future and even if it's overpopulated,  we will have the power to understand overpopulation.

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