Pre-1st Grade English Composition (2017-2)

TOPIC

Agree or disagree: The Japanese goverment should do more to protect the enviroment

POINTS

Economic costs

Endangered species

Natural resources

Pollution

 I agree that the Japanese goverment should do more to protect the environment. I'll state about the reason and more below.

 First of all, not only the Japanese goverment and also other goverment should do more to protect the enviroment. That's because it destorys the environment if we don't protect it. As a result, it will cause pollutions. For example, if something that we use like air conditioners extract give out more fron freon gases, the earth will became hotter and hotter. 

 Second, if we countine to pollute the earth and the Japanese goverment don't protect the environment, we are going to have more assignment for our life. We will work much harder to get the earth better because we tackle the contradiction like pollutions that humans cause. To prevent it, the goverment impose economic costs on their buget.

 To sum up, If we are not aware of what to do for the earth, we need to come up with the measurements and tackle it. It's for what we are and the future.

TIME:20 minutes

WORDS:170

extract 引き抜く

総評

冒険してextractやwhat we areを使ってみたが、意味が合わなかった。時間をかけたから長めのである。ライティングは書けば力が付くとよくわかってきた。フロンガスは"freon gas"と表記。発音はカタカナで書けば「フレオンガス」に近い。measurementは「測定」という意味だが、measurementsと複数形になると「対策」という意味になる。